Ok, you're definitely a poet. Pay attention to everything I highlighted. Can't fool another poet. If you have poetry I want to read it ALL. Your metaphors and similes were descriptive and vivid. I was invested in this story. Why? I'm the guy in the story. Well once upon a time I was. Not anymore. I transformed into someone else.

When you get a chance type in my name and my article Frozen in a place I hide. As a matter of fact the woman I'm writing about turned me on to one of my favorite movies .The Abyss. You'll see how much yoour quote I highl that I highlighted related to my story. I enjoyed this read Sophia. It made me reflect within a still moment of introspection.